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    Could you please correct my sentences if there is any issue on grammar?

    1. A special treat for this Syawal about the meaning of love and being loved in chaotic circumstances.


    2. All-time greatest Indonesian movies for this Syawal that depict about friendship, forgiveness and acceptance.

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    Re: Message

    Three things.

    1. They are not sentences.
    2. I would call them noun phrases.
    3. Don't use "depict about".

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