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    #1

    Bob got angry with his sister

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    Bob got angry with his sister when he noticed she was trying to set him up with a daughter of a rich company owner. He told her he wanted a decent woman and not a cash machine.

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    #2

    Re: Bob got angry with his sister

    I think it is better to use "he found out" in place of "he noticed". I have trouble with "a rich company owner". It sounds weird. The rest is fine.

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    #3

    Re: Bob got angry with his sister

    Would "a wealthy company owner" be better?

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    #4

    Re: Bob got angry with his sister

    I think it is better to use "a wealthy businessman."

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