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    #1

    When a young teacher, Clara, arrived

    I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

    When a young teacher, Clara, arrived in a godforsaken village, her first thought was, "Oh God, what have I done to deserve this?"

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    #2

    Re: When a young teacher, Clara, arrived

    Consider changing either (or both) of the indefinite articles to the definite article.

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