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    Smile Please, help me to correct these sentences. Thank you

    Over the past 25 years, access to school has increased dramatically and girls are staying in school longer. Not only the girls learn more, but they do so in a safely environment. But as girls stay in education longer, the challenges they face outside school have the potential to disrupt their education. Factors including early pregnancy and gender-based violence pose challenges. If girls would be better educated, these problems would be easier to solve. If only girls have more confidence in themselves! if my teacher were stricter with me when I was young, I would have studied harder. I wish I studied harder at school when I was a teenager.

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    Re: Please, help me to correct these sentences. Thank you

    Hello Lumi C, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lumi C View Post
    Over the past 25 years, access to schools has increased dramatically, and girls are staying in school longer. Not only the do girls, nowadays, learn more, but they do so in a safe ly environment. But as girls stay in education longer, the challenges they face outside school have the potential to disrupt their education. Factors including early pregnancy and gender-based violence pose serious challenges. If girls would can be better educated, these problems would be easier to address. solve. If only girls can have more confidence in themselves! If my teacher were stricter with me when I was young, I would have studied harder. I wish I had studied harder at school when I was a teenager.

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