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    Would appreciate help with this email

    I would appreciate any help to fix up this email I have typed up. I recently graduated about 3 weeks ago, and am going through my job search and would like to email one of my professors to ask for help or any contacts he may have to help me get into the industry. The email is below with "<>" being blocked out for privacy. Any help would be appreciated.

    Dear Dr. <>,

    I hope you had a great Memorial Day Weekend. I am a previous student of your <> class over this last semester, and have recently graduated. I really enjoyed the subject matter in these classes, and learned a great deal. I am looking to get into the industry and have been applying to jobs and would greatly appreciate any advice. I would also greatly appreciate any contacts you may have of people in the industry. Thank you for your time, I greatly appreciate it.


    Best Regards,

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    Re: Would appreciate help with this email

    Hi kfuller2013, and welcome to the forum.
    Quote Originally Posted by kfuller2013 View Post
    I would appreciate any help to fix up with this the email below. I have typed up. I recently graduated about three weeks ago, and I am going through my job searching for a job. and I would like to email one of my professors to ask for help or any contacts he may have to help me get into the industry. The email is below with "<>" being blocked out for privacy. Any help would be appreciated.

    Dear Dr. <>,

    I hope you had a great Memorial Day Weekend. I am a previous student of your <> class over this from last semester, and I have recently graduated. I really enjoyed the subject matter in these your classes and learned a great deal. I am looking to get into the industry and have been applying to for various jobs. and I would greatly appreciate any advice you may have for me in this regard. I would also greatly appreciate be very grateful to you if you can give me any contacts you may have of people in the industry. Thank you, and my best regards. for your time, I greatly appreciate it.

    Yours sincerely,

    Kyle Fuller.
    Best Regards,

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