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    When the intoxicated singer forgot his text

    Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentences?

    When the intoxicated singer forgot his text, the audience booed him off stage and threw bottles and shoes at the band. They were chased away and told never to come back again.
    Last edited by Bassim; 30-May-2017 at 14:50.

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    Re: When the intoxicated singer forgot his text

    He forgot his lyrics.

    The "they" in your second sentence is ambiguous. Was the band chased away or the audience?

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    Re: When the intoxicated singer forgot his text

    It was of course the band. I used "they" to avoid using "band" twice. Should I writer instead: "The musicians were chased away..."
    Last edited by Bassim; 30-May-2017 at 16:10.

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    Re: When the intoxicated singer forgot his text

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentences?

    When the intoxicated singer forgot his text lyrics/words, the audience booed him off stage and threw bottles and shoes at the band,. They were chased before chasing them away and told telling them never to come back again.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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