[Cover Letter] Please correct my cover leter

[andrzej204]

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing in response to your job advertisement regarding a position of Automation Engineer no. 22/RT/2017, which I found on webside.com. I would like to apply for this post.
I hold a BE in Mechatronics and I am currently studying full-time second-cycle studies at the same course. I have a solid theoretical background, which I gained on engineering studies and I keep developing them. Apart from the book learning I tried to gain a hands-on experience of industry during internships. I familiarized with company organization rules in different departments. I took part in routine maintenance procedures at an assembly line. Recently I have gained some programing skills.
I would like to work for your company because I am looking for a challenging and demanding position. I expect possibilities for further career development and your company gives promising prospects to your employees. Knowledge, skills and personality will help me to do my job diligently and the experience gained in working in various positions will be a true asset.
I would appreciate the opportunity to interview for the advertised position and discuss my qualifications with you further.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ

 

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Dear Sir or Madam,

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I would like to work for your company because I am looking for a challenging and demanding position. I expect possibilities for further career development and your company [STRIKE]gives[/STRIKE] offers promising prospects to your employees. My knowledge, skills and personality will help me to do my job diligently and the experience gained in working in various positions will also help me in that regard. [STRIKE]be a true asset.[/STRIKE]

I would appreciate the opportunity [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] of an interview for the advertised position [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] to discuss my qualifications further with you. [STRIKE]further.[/STRIKE]


Please find included a copy of my CV, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

XYZ

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