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Hello all,
May I ask someone to check the following paragraph for mistakes?
"I come from a relatively large family. In fact, I have a nuclear family of five. I have two sisters but unfortunately no brothers, and I am a middle child. Sometimes I wish I had one brother because I feel that life would be more enjoyable if I had at least one. Anyway, developing strong bond and also holding mutual respects are those that I am very proud to in my family. We often have great time spending with each other, exchanging our information, and sharing our ideas with one other. Furthermore, a deep and real affection have developed between us.
Last edited by nininaz; 31-May-2017 at 19:15.
So interested in learning English.
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