Results 1 to 4 of 4
  1. Just Joined
    Interested in Language
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Russian
      • Home Country:
      • Russian Federation
      • Current Location:
      • Russian Federation

    • Join Date: May 2017
    • Posts: 1
    #1

    Please check short essay

    Could anyone please help me - please check my short essay. Does it look good? - http://1hello.ru/leksika/the-internet-in-my-life.html

  2. emsr2d2's Avatar
    Moderator
    English Teacher
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • UK

    • Join Date: Jul 2009
    • Posts: 47,348
    #2

    Re: Please check short essay

    Welcome to the forum.

    1. Many members of this forum are, quite rightly, reluctant to click on links.
    2. I took the risk and clicked on the link. It goes to an essay in Russian! That's no use to anyone here. You need to write your entire essay in English and post it in the Editing and Writing Topics section, and then we will look at it. Do not post a link. Write your whole essay in a new thread.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

  3. Raymott's Avatar
    VIP Member
    Academic
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • Australia
      • Current Location:
      • Australia

    • Join Date: Jun 2008
    • Posts: 25,245
    #3

    Re: Please check short essay

    ems, the body of the essay is also given in English, parallel to the Russian.

    Yuri, if you don't post it here, it can't be corrected properly.

  4. emsr2d2's Avatar
    Moderator
    English Teacher
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • UK

    • Join Date: Jul 2009
    • Posts: 47,348
    #4

    Re: Please check short essay

    Apologies, I looked at the link on my phone the first time and it showed only the Russian version. I have now seen the full width of the screen. However, as we have both said, the essay needs to be posted here.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

Similar Threads

  1. Could someone check my short essay?
    By bakluka438 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 12-Apr-2016, 23:29
  2. Replies: 3
    Last Post: 28-Oct-2009, 22:02
  3. please check my short essay
    By jcdenton12 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 09-Feb-2008, 14:47
  4. plz check a short essay
    By ghai_prince13 in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 06-Jun-2007, 12:57
  5. Please Check This Really Short Essay?
    By tanyasmart in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 24-Mar-2006, 06:59

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •