Please check short essay

[Yuri Smith]

Could anyone please help me - please check my short essay. Does it look good? - http://1hello.ru/leksika/the-internet-in-my-life.html

 

[emsr2d2]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

1. Many members of this forum are, quite rightly, reluctant to click on links.
2. I took the risk and clicked on the link. It goes to an essay in Russian! That's no use to anyone here. You need to write your entire essay in English and post it in the Editing and Writing Topics section, and then we will look at it. Do not post a link. Write your whole essay in a new thread.

 

[Raymott]

ems, the body of the essay is also given in English, parallel to the Russian.

Yuri, if you don't post it here, it can't be corrected properly.

 

[emsr2d2]

Apologies, I looked at the link on my phone the first time and it showed only the Russian version. I have now seen the full width of the screen. However, as we have both said, the essay needs to be posted here.