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    Kevin due to the intake of the drugs to lose weight

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kevin due to the intake of the drugs to lose weight and in addition of his fragile state, was dispersed, more as the usual in the conversation. That is why suddenly an old lady fixing her hair caught her attention and suddenly stopped talking to Susan."

    Thanks.

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    Re: Kevin due to the intake of the drugs to lose weight

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kevin, due to the his intake of the weight-loss drugs to lose weight and in addition of his fragile state, was dispersed (this word is not appropriate but I don't know what you mean - perhaps "distracted"?), more as the than usual in during the conversation. That is why suddenly an old lady fixing her hair caught her his attention and he suddenly stopped talking to Susan."

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    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Kevin due to the intake of the drugs to lose weight

    Dear emsr2d2:

    First of all, thanks for your help.

    Yes, I mean distracted.

    Best Regards.

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