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    #11

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    Thanks for give me this note.
    I'm sorry for that

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    #12

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    Yes I did and added information about faculty and department at the original post and I'm sorry if I confused you.

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    #13

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamila2 View Post
    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I have BSCs Degree in xxxii from xxxii university.
    I have great interest to request an admission wish to apply for a full-time, three-month training course at the Department of Haematology, the Faculty of Laboratory Sciences in your prestigious university. faculty of laboratory sciences department of haematology .
    I would really appreciate that if you offer me a three month training course and I would be able to spend the full day working hours.

    I found out about your training course through a friend of mine who works in that department. at your institute.
    Training in your reputed university would provide me an opportunity to increase my knowledge, improve my skills and definitely boost my career prospects.
    I'm willing motivated to apply for this course because it's it would be an honor to for me to educate study in "name of university" University, which is one of the most successful Arab universities. and also I'm also interested because I'm resident in "Country" and can easily obtain a visa to enter "Country of university", also and because my family are resident in "Country of university", so accommodation will not be a problem.

    I give you my assurance that throughout the internship program, I would work hard with my sincere dedication, and respect the my seniors and the integrity of the lab. don't harm the instruments.

    Below are my contact details and mailing address for correspondence.

    Thanks for your time and effort to kind consideration, and I look forward to your reply. my letter.
    I'm looking forward to receiving you reply...
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    #14

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    I'd use "reputable university" or "highly-regarded university" rather than "reputed university".
    Last edited by teechar; 06-Jun-2017 at 15:19. Reason: added full stop
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #15

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    Oops! I missed that.

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    #16

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    Thank you very much teacher.
    I would like to ask you about the shortness of the letter what else should I add to make it perfect and convincing

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    #17

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamila2 View Post
    Thank you very much, teechar.
    I would like to ask you about the shortness of the letter. What else should I add to make it perfect and more convincing?
    You can talk a little about yourself/your background and your achievements or suitability for this course. You can also mention something about your future goals/aspirations.

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    #18

    Re: Correction to request letter for training course

    Are you certain that the university is currently offering internships in that department? I'm aware that you said a friend of yours told you about them but I would, in the first instance, make sure that such an internship is currently on offer before spending a lot of time on the application letter. Perhaps you could contact the university/faculty/department, find out if the opportunity exists and ask them what they need from you in order to apply.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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