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    Sentence correction

    Please correct my sentence. I have 2 sentences for the same purpose. Tell me which will be the right choice.

    1.I have put a request for newspaper bill in hrms(Human Resource Management System). Please reject the bills.

    2.I have initiated a request in hrms for newspaper. Please reject the bill

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    Re: Sentence correction

    Quote Originally Posted by poongodi View Post
    Please correct my sentences . I have 2 sentences for the same purpose. and tell me which will might be the right better choice.

    1.I have put a request for newspaper bill in hrms(Human Resource Management System). Please reject the bills.

    2.I have initiated a request in hrms for newspaper. Please reject the bill
    I don't understand either. Please use simpler and clearer language to express your meaning.

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    Re: Sentence correction

    There is a provision in my working unit to reimburse the amount spent for newspaper every month. That reimbursement request need to be raised through the internal website(that is called hrms). I have applied for a wrong amount.So I need to request the employer to reject my request

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    Re: Sentence correction

    I erroneously claimed for [amount of money] from HRMS on [date]. Please cancel the claim. I will submit a claim for the correct amount in due course.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Sentence correction

    Thank you sir. Shall I write, please cancel all my reimbursement requests in hrms ???

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    Re: Sentence correction

    Quote Originally Posted by poongodi View Post
    Thank you. sir. Don't refer to users here as "sir". It suggests that you assume we are all male.

    Shall I write (no comma here) "Please cancel all my reimbursement requests in hrms HRMS"? ???
    Note my corrections above.

    I don't know if you should write that. Do you want them to cancel all your requests or only the one that contained the incorrect figure?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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