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    At that holiday she was tired after celebrarting christmas

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "At that holiday she was tired after celebrarting christmas with her family the day before. Kevin's call was inoportune, because she sleeping and her mother, who was cooking, woke her up, and that kind of things always provoked bad temper in her. However mother chose to woke her daughter anyway, although knowing of the few possibilities of Kevin, she felt appreciation for him.!

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    Re: At that holiday she was tired after celebrarting christmas

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "At that holiday That day, she was tired after celebrarting celebrating Christmas with her family the day before. Kevin's call was inopportune (no comma here) because she was sleeping and her mother, who was cooking, woke her up. and That kind of things thing always provoked put her in a bad temper. in her. However, her mother chose to woke wake her daughter anyway, although knowing of the few possibilities of Kevin, she felt appreciation for him.!

    Thanks.
    See my corrections above. I don't know what you mean by the last part (underlined and in blue). Can you try to explain that part in a different way?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: At that holiday she was tired after celebrarting christmas

    Dear emsr2d2:

    First of all, thanks for your help.

    The mother of the girl, knew about Kevin. She knew that he had really few chances to be the boyfriend of her daughter.

    However, she still wake up his daughter to talk to Kevin, because she felt appreciation for him, since she considered him a good boy.

    Thanks.

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