contiluo
Member
- Joined
- Apr 12, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please help me make the paragraph below sound natural. Thanks.
I aspire to be a successful lawyer in the future. I am an organized and analytical person whose strengths are in analyzing problems and advising others. I choose law because I want a job where I will contribute to upholding and enhancing the rule of law by striving for justice. Furthermore, being a lawyer will give me the opportunity to use the law to make someone’s life better. It is rewarding to pursue my goal with passion.
I aspire to be a successful lawyer in the future. I am an organized and analytical person whose strengths are in analyzing problems and advising others. I choose law because I want a job where I will contribute to upholding and enhancing the rule of law by striving for justice. Furthermore, being a lawyer will give me the opportunity to use the law to make someone’s life better. It is rewarding to pursue my goal with passion.