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    daydreaming

    Please help me make the paragraph below sound natural. Thanks.

    I have a daydream to be a novelist. Iíve always loved to write. I write as a way to express myself. I write because writing is my passion, and it also gives me a chance to express an emotion, idea, feeling, concept and thought. Since I was a child, I have written short stories and loved escaping into fiction. When I am bored, my mind would drift to some world from my imagination. The ideas keep nagging me until I get them written down. It also forms an outlet for my urge to tell my story in novel form. I want to share my imagination and creativity with readers. If readers give me feedback, it will give me great pleasure and a sense of achievement. Perhaps it is my unrealistic expectation to be a novelist. However, let me keep daydreaming.

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    Re: daydreaming

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    I have a day dream of (one day) becoming to be a novelist. Iíve always loved to write. I write as a way to of expressing myself. I write because writing is my passion, and it also gives me a chance to express an emotion, idea, feeling, concept and thought. Since I was a child, I have written short stories and loved escaping into fiction. When I am bored, my mind would drifts to some world from my imagination. The ideas keep nagging me until I get write them written down. It also forms Writing also represents an outlet for my urge to tell my story in novel form. I want to share my imagination and creativity with readers. If readers give me feedback, it will gives me great pleasure and a sense of achievement. Perhaps it is my an unrealistic expectation to be that I can become a novelist. However, let me keep day dreaming.
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