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    ttal54 is offline Newbie
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    Application letter correction

    Hello

    I need your help to correct my application letter for a spontaneous application internship. Any improvement or suggestion is welcome.

    Here is the letter :

    Subject: Spontaneous application for internship




    Dear Sir or Madam


    French student, passionated about new technologies I would like increase my international experience in this field and improve my english. For these reasons, I am applying for an internship paid or not from 24th July to 25th August in your company, where I will be happy to help you to raise it.


    Currently, in first year of « Classes Préparatoires aux Grandes Ecoles », it is actually Two-year highly selective classes which prepare for the competitive exams to the best « Grandes Ecoles ».
    This intensive course to become engineer, give me many abilities such as a strong organisation, fast learning and adaption of any situation.


    I have a few computer skills (coding, database..), since I love learning, I aim to use this summer holiday to improve my hardware knowledge and my practice.
    I am very dynamic and easy-going person who likes working efficiently, in a good atmosphere as my experience in a youth centre shows.


    Motivated, I am used to always invest all myself in the tasks that I perform, so I really hope you will give me the opportunity to get new skills .


    I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


    Yours faithfully.


    Thanks You

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    teechar is offline Moderator
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    Re: Application letter correction

    Quote Originally Posted by ttal54 View Post
    Hello,

    I need your help to correct my application letter for a spontaneous application internship. Any improvement or suggestion is welcome.

    Here is the letter:

    Subject: Spontaneous application for internship

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I'm a French student, and I'm passionate about new technologies. I would like to increase my international experience in this field and improve my English. For these reasons, I am applying for an internship (paid or not) from 24th July to 25th August in your company, where I will give it my best effort. be happy to help you to raise it.

    Currently, I'm in my first year of Classes Préparatoires aux Grandes Ecoles. It is actually a two-year highly selective classes program which prepares students for the competitive entry exams to the best Grandes Ecoles.

    This intensive course to become an engineer give will teach me many abilities skills such as a strong organisation, fast learning and adaption of any to various situations.

    I have a few good computer skills (coding and databases) and, since I love learning, I aim to use this summer holiday to improve my knowledge of hardware knowledge and my programming skills. practice.

    I am a very dynamic and easy-going person who likes working efficiently , in a good atmosphere and collaboratively, as my experience in a youth centre shows.

    Motivated, I am used to always investing all my effort self in the tasks that I perform, so I really hope you will give me the opportunity to get new skills.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


    Yours faithfully,

    Jamie Colt

    Thanks You
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