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    When she was at high school, she walked from

    Hello.


    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kelly walked down the street with a backpack in her back. A child ran close to her, causing a memory to appear in his mind.

    When she was at high school, she walked from her building to the bus station every day. One Summer day, she heard someone running behind her. Is SAM, who is agitated after running after her. When Kelly turned to see who he was, she realized that it was Kevin, a overweight boy who seemed agitated after running the street for a few meters to reach her."

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    Re: When she was at high school, she walked from

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Kelly walked down the street with her backpack. in her back. A child ran close to her, which reminded her of something. causing a memory to appear in his mind.

    When she was at high school, she walked from her building to the bus station every day. One summer's day, she heard someone running behind her. Is SAM, who is agitated after running after her. When Kelly turned to see who he it was, she realized that it was Kevin, an overweight boy who seemed agitated after running the street for a few meters to reach her."

    Thanks.
    I don't understand the parts in blue.

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    Re: When she was at high school, she walked from

    Dear teechar:

    One again, thanks for your help.

    Is SAM, who is agitated after running after her. I will erase that part, it was a mistake.

    running the street for a few meters to reach her." Kevin was waiting that Kelly left her building and then that she walked to the bus station. He would run through the streets until he met her, as if it were a coincidence.

    When she was at high school, she walked from her building to the bus station every day. One summer's day, she heard someone running behind her. When Kelly turned to see who he it was, she realized that it was Kevin, an overweight boy who seemed agitated after running through the streets to reach her."

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    Re: When she was at high school, she walked from

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    Dear teechar,

    One again, thanks for your help.

    "Is SAM, who is agitated after running after her." I will erase that part. it was a mistake.

    "Running the street for a few meters to reach her." Kevin was waiting that for Kelly left to leave her building and then that she walk ed to the bus station. He would run through the streets until he met her, as if it were a coincidence.

    When she was at high school, she walked from her building to the bus station every day. One summer's day, she heard someone running behind her. When Kelly turned to see who he it was, she realized that it was Kevin, an overweight boy who seemed agitated after running through the streets to reach her."
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