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    ttal54 is offline Newbie
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    Check of my spontaneous application letter for an internship

    Hello

    I need someone who can help me to correct my application letter for an internship. Any correction or suggestion are welcome.
    Here is the letter:

    Subject: Spontaneous application for internship




    Dear Sir or Madam


    French student, passionated about new technologies I would like increase my international experience in this field and improve my english. For these reasons, I am applying for an internship paid or not from 24th July to 25th August in your company, where I will be happy to help you to raise it.


    Currently, in first year of « Classes Préparatoires aux Grandes Ecoles », it is actually Two-year highly selective classes which prepare for the competitive exams to the best « Grandes Ecoles ».
    This intensive course to become engineer, give me many abilities such as a strong organisation, fast learning and adaption of any situation.


    I have a few computer skills (coding, database..), since I love learning, I aim to use this summer holiday to improve my hardware knowledge and my practice.
    I am very dynamic and easy-going person who likes working efficiently, in a good atmosphere as my experience in a youth centre shows.


    Motivated, I am used to always invest all myself in the tasks that I perform, so I really hope you will give me the opportunity to get new skills .


    I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


    Yours faithfully.


    Thanks You

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    teechar is offline Moderator
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    Re: Check of my spontaneous application letter for an internship

    Please do not post the same thing more than once.

    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...ter-correction

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