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    A Thai Movie: Hangout

    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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    Nine people were invited by a mysterious lad, to hangout in a villa situated in an island to discuss a big project. As they accepted the invitation they headed to the island and while there trouble ensues as one of them gets killed. The rest were marooned in the island as their boat will only arrive five days later. Though they tried hard to stay safe more of them were killed. Eventually one of them found who the murderer is but unfortunately died before being able to disclose the truth.

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    Nine people who were invited to an island by a mysterious lad tries hard to survive when someone began to murder them one by one.

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    Re: A Thai Movie: Hangout

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

    Long Summary
    Nine people were are invited by a mysterious lad to hang out in a villa situated in on an island to discuss a big project. As they accept the invitation, they head to the island and, while there, trouble ensues as one of them gets killed. The rest were are marooned in the island as their boat will only arrive five days later. Though they try hard to stay safe, more of them were get killed. Eventually, one of them found finds out who the murderer is but, unfortunately, dies before being able to disclose the truth.

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    Nine people who were are invited to an island by a mysterious lad try hard to survive when someone begins to murder them one by one.
    For such summaries, we typically use the present simple.

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    Re: A Thai Movie: Hangout

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
    For such summaries, we typically use the present simple.
    Noted on the present simple tense.

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