A Thai Movie: Hangout

[Gaya87]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
Nine people were invited by a mysterious lad, to hangout in a villa situated in an island to discuss a big project. As they accepted the invitation they headed to the island and while there trouble ensues as one of them gets killed. The rest were marooned in the island as their boat will only arrive five days later. Though they tried hard to stay safe more of them were killed. Eventually one of them found who the murderer is but unfortunately died before being able to disclose the truth.

Short Summary
Nine people who were invited to an island by a mysterious lad tries hard to survive when someone began to murder them one by one.

 

[teechar]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
Nine people [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] are invited by a mysterious lad to hang out in a villa situated [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] on an island to discuss a big project. As they accept the invitation, they head to the island and, while there, trouble ensues as one of them gets killed. The rest [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] are marooned in the island as their boat will only arrive five days later. Though they try hard to stay safe, more of them [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] get killed. Eventually, one of them [STRIKE]found[/STRIKE] finds out who the murderer is but, unfortunately, dies before being able to disclose the truth.

Short Summary
Nine people who [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] are invited to an island by a mysterious lad try hard to survive when someone begins to murder them one by one.

For such summaries, we typically use the present simple.

 

[Gaya87]

For such summaries, we typically use the present simple.

Noted on the present simple tense.