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    At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job because of being separated

    Hi,

    Could you please check this sentence?

    At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job in consequence of being separated from people who I had know for years. However, at the end, I got used to my new working environment.

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    Re: At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job because of being separated

    Quote Originally Posted by ambitious-girl View Post
    At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job in consequence as a result of being separated from my previous colleagues people who whom I had known and worked with for years. However, at the end, I got used to my new working environment.
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    Re: At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job because of being separated

    I'd use "in the end", not "at the end".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job because of being separated

    Ambitious-girl, try:

    However, I eventually got used to my new working environment.

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