Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
In the hallway of his apartment, Carl stopped for a couple of seconds, seeing Lloyd and Susan working fast, preparing the second part of the practical joke. He resumed his walk to the kitchen to prepare the "special" drink for his friend. In this second time, Carl breathed deeply and finally decided that instead of smashing three of the pills with hallucinogens he smashed two pills. After that he mixed the drink and the hallucinogen in a cocktail shaker.
Thanks.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
In the hallway of his apartment, Carl stopped for a couple of seconds, seeing Lloyd and Susan working fast, preparing the second part of the practical joke. He resumed his walk to the kitchen to prepare the "special" drink for his friend. In this second time, Carl breathed deeply and finally decided that instead of smashing three of the pills with hallucinogens he smashed two pills. After that he mixed the drink and the hallucinogen in a cocktail shaker.
Thanks.