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    AirbusA321 is offline Banned
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    car makers

    Is this text okay or does it need improvement?

    European car makers must be terrified when having a look on the streets of Manila. Millions of Nissans, Kias and Toyotas are driving around there but hardly any Mercedeses or VWs. The Filipinos obviously don't like their cars and prefer Asian products.
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    Re: car makers

    It could be improved in many ways. Here are some errors.

    Sentence 1
    terrified
    having a look


    Sentence 2
    Millions
    driving around there
    Mercedeses


    Sentence 3 doesn't make sense.

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