ambitious-girl
Senior Member
- Joined
- Apr 29, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hello,
Could someone please check the following paragraph for errors?
Studying abroad can/will probably be an educational experience for foreign students. In other words, it may broaden students’ horizons, and, in addition, such experience can expand their knowledge of the world, as a result of their being exposed to different cultures and customs, which can be interesting and enjoyable in some way. In terms of job, they are more likely to be paid on high salaries, soon making them more independent. Therefore, they will be able to own their home.
Thank you.
Could someone please check the following paragraph for errors?
Studying abroad can/will probably be an educational experience for foreign students. In other words, it may broaden students’ horizons, and, in addition, such experience can expand their knowledge of the world, as a result of their being exposed to different cultures and customs, which can be interesting and enjoyable in some way. In terms of job, they are more likely to be paid on high salaries, soon making them more independent. Therefore, they will be able to own their home.
Thank you.
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