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    JACEK1 is offline Key Member
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    marked or was started by

    Hello all members!
    The preliminary versions of the below-mentioned sentence read as follows:
    The official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X started with the ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town.
    and
    The official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X was started by the ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town.
    The ceremony of laying the keel on New Vulcan slipway on the premises of Industrial Park of Y town marked the official beginning of building of the passenger and car ferry for customer X.
    Which version is the most suitable?
    What is your opinion?
    Thank you.
    I support the bolded sentence.
    Last edited by JACEK1; 07-Jul-2017 at 06:22.

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    J&K Tutoring Guest

    Re: marked or was started by

    The start of construction of a passenger and car ferry for X was marked by the ceremonial laying of the keel on New Vulcan slipway of Y town industrial park.

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