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    If you eat more than one egg yolk every day you may contract a heart disease in the f

    If you eat more than one egg yolk every day you may contract a heart disease in the future. But doctors say only 60% people out of 100% would face this problem if they ate it on regular basis and 40% would not face any problems. It could be vice versa. I don't remember which ratio was more 60% people wouldn't face any problem or 40% people.

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    Re: If you eat more than one egg yolk every day you may contract a heart disease in t

    Quote Originally Posted by tufguy View Post
    If you eat more than one egg yolk every day, you may contract a develop heart disease in the future. But However, doctors say only 60% of people out of 100% would face this problem even if they ate it them on a regular basis, and 40% would not face any problems. (It could be vice versa. I don't remember which ratio it was.) more 60% people wouldn't face any problem or 40% people.

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