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    When I worked with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    1) When I worked with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    2) I can't work a six day-week so I am not working with them.

    3) My friend told me about a company where you have to work a three-day week.

    Please check my sentences.

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    Re: When I worked with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    #3 is OK.

    Try rewriting #1 without repeating worked and #2 without using work and working in the same sentence.

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    Re: When I worked with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    Try rewriting #1 without repeating worked and #2 without using work and working in the same sentence.
    Thanks teacher.
    What are the substitutions for #1 and #2?
    Last edited by ambitious-girl; 10-Jul-2017 at 08:53.

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    Re: When I worked with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    This is tufguy's thread, A-G.

    We're waiting to see his rewrites.

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    Re: When I worked with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    #3 is OK.

    Try rewriting #1 without repeating worked and #2 without using work and working in the same sentence.
    1) When I was with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    2) I can't work a six day-week so I am not with them.

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    Re: When I worked with my previous company I worked a five-day week.

    Very good!

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