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    zecaloteiro is offline Newbie
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    Hotel Question Email

    Hi,


    I need to ask to the hotel I'm going to stay if they could hold some purchase for me until I arrive.
    Then I wrote this email to send them.


    Subject: Information
    Message:
    Hi,

    My name is Rafael.
    I have a 2 days reservation for 18th October 17.
    I'm wondering if I receive a parcel about 3 days before my arriving could you hold it to me until my check in...


    Is it possible?
    Thank you.

    Br,
    Rafael


    Is this correct?
    Could the hotel understand my request?


    Thanks ;)
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 14-Jul-2017 at 20:12. Reason: Removed quote box to make responses easier

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    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
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    Re: Hotel Question Email

    Quote Originally Posted by zecaloteiro View Post
    Hi,

    I need to ask to the hotel I'm going to stay in/at if they could hold some a purchase for me until I arrive (no full stop here) Then so I wrote this email to send them.


    Subject: Information A request
    Message:
    Hi,

    My name is Rafael (add your surname so they can trace your booking). I have a 2 days reservation for two nights for from 18th October 2017.

    I'm wondering if I receive If I have a parcel sent to the hotel about 3 days before my arriving arrival, could you hold it to for me until my I check in?

    Is Please let me know if it is possible.
    Thank you.

    Br,
    Rafael


    Is this correct?
    Could Will the hotel understand my request?

    Thanks. ;)
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    tedmc is online now VIP Member
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    Re: Hotel Question Email

    Can you do me a favour by taking delivery of a parcel and keeping it three days before I arrive to stay at your hotel on the 18 October?
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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