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    Music

    Could you please check this sentence?

    Music has sure found its way into our lives and has become an inseparable part of our it.
    Listening to music, especially soothing music can be an extremely powerful tool to help you get rid of all the unnecessary stress in your daily life. It helps your mind calm down and drags your attention away from all the negative thoughts that tag along with stress.
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    Re: Music

    Quote Originally Posted by newkeenlearner View Post
    Could you please check this these sentence​s?

    Music has sure found its way into our lives and has become an inseparable part of our it them.
    Listening to music, especially soothing music, can be an extremely powerful tool to help you get rid of all the unnecessary stress in your daily life. It helps your mind calm down and drags your attention away from all the negative thoughts that tag go along with stress.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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