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    wulala is offline Newbie
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    Please correct my thank you email/follow-up email

    It is a follow-up email after an interview, please help me improve my language and structure.

    Dear Professor Li,

    It was a pleasure talking with you last Saturday, which really inspires and motivates me in many ways. Thank you for taking your time out of schedule to this interview. The Talking provides me a more clear outlook of the online education, and the professional attitude and the visionary perspective of the Institute of Online Education really resonate with me. This position will definitely be my best option.

    Apart from my enthusiasm, I have many years of experience in online education, whether being a teacher or a student; and the educational background of computer science will make me outperform other people in this position.

    I look forward to hearing from you next week concerning the final decision. Please feel free to contact me beforehand if you have any problem. My phone number is 5555555
    Thank you again for your time and consideration

    Sincerely,

    Tyler Wu
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    tedmc is online now VIP Member
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    Re: Please correct my thank you email/follow-up email

    Quote Originally Posted by wulala View Post
    It is a follow-up email after an interview, please help me improve my language and structure.

    Dear Professor Li,

    It was a pleasure talking with you last Saturday. which It has really inspired and motivated me in many ways. Thank you for taking your time out of your busy schedule to this attend the interview. The Talking meeting has provided me with a more clearer outlook of the online education. and The professional attitude and the visionary perspective of the Institute of Online Education really resonate with me. This position will definitely be my best option(what position and option for what?).

    Apart from my enthusiasm, I have many years of experience in online education, whether being both as a teacher or and a student; and the my educational background of in computer science will make me enable me to outperform other people in this position.

    I look forward to hearing from you next week concerning the final decision. Please feel free to contact me beforehand if you have any problem queries/questions. My phone number is 5555555
    Thank you again for your time and consideration

    Sincerely,

    Tyler Wu
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    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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