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    AirbusA321 is offline Banned
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    secret video

    Please check if both versions are correct and which one is better.

    1 I secretly made a video of random people who entered and left a supermarket.
    2 I made a secret video of randomly chosen people who entered and left a supermarket.

    Additional question: Can I replace "who entered and left" with "entering and leaving"?

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    AirbusA321 is offline Banned
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    Re: secret video

    How about these versions?

    3 I secretly made a video of random people that were entering and leaving a supermarket.
    4 I secretly made a video of random people while (they were) entering and leaving a supermarket.

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