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    One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    Would you mind checking this sentence?

    One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it can be used while you do your usual deeds so that it really doesn't take extra time.


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    Re: One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    Deeds???

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    Re: One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    Deeds???
    How about "work" or "jobs" ? This word "deeds" sounds weired to me too.

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    Re: One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    Quote Originally Posted by newkeenlearner View Post
    How about "work" or "jobs"? This The word "deeds" sounds weired weird to me too.
    What sort of things did you mean by "usual deeds"? That will help us choose the appropriate term.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    chores

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    Re: One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it can be used while you do your jobs or chores so that it really doesn't take extra time.

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    Re: One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    End the sentence at 'chores'. What follows makes no sense.

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    Re: One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that it ca

    I would use "you can listen" rather than "it can be used".

    One of the great benefits of music as a stress reliever is that you can listen while you do your chores.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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