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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    David entered the lobby of a luxury hotel

    I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

    David entered the lobby of a luxury hotel and was dazed by the sparkle of chandeliers, fine furniture, paintings in gold frames, and the well groomed guests with their expensive jewellery and watches.

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    Re: David entered the lobby of a luxury hotel

    When I first read your sentence, I saw "dazzled" instead of "dazed". I find "dazzled" more natural. Also, you need to hyphenate "well-groomed".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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