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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    David has a penchant

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    David has a penchant for collecting vinyl records. He has them neatly stacked in glass-door cabinets all over his flat.

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    Re: David has a penchant

    I'd remove "collecting". I'd use "glass-fronted cabinets".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: David has a penchant

    The sentence is fine in Canadian English.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 24-Jul-2017 at 12:22. Reason: Added missing closing punctuation mark.
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    Re: David has a penchant

    Fine in AE as well except for the word "flat". We prefer "apartment".

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    Re: David has a penchant

    I see no reason to remove collecting.

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