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    yi-ing is offline Senior Member
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    She was seen by Dorian as a wonderful and extraordinarily clever woman wh

    Could you please check this paragraph?

    One month later Dorian went to visit Harry to talk about his adventurous life. Then Harry found out that Dorian had been in love with an actress, whose name is Sybil vane. She was seen by Dorian as a wonderful and extraordinarily clever woman who one day would be a famous actress.

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    tedmc is online now VIP Member
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    Re: She was seen by Dorian as a wonderful and extraordinarily clever woman wh

    Quote Originally Posted by yi-ing View Post
    Could you please check this paragraph?

    One month later Dorian went to visit Harry to talk about his adventurous life. Then Harry found out that Dorian had been in love with an actress, whose name is was Sybil Vane. She was seen by Dorian saw her as a wonderful and extraordinarily clever woman who one day would be a famous actress.
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    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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