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    Question hello can you check my essay please

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    Hello can you check my essay please:

    The first chart describe why some people cycling to work, the second one describe why others prefer driving to work.

    Therese 2 main reason for way people prefer ride bicycle for 30%, first is health and fitness the second is that a bicycle is less pollution than a car, while 15% of theme prefer bicycle for it parking facility, the other 13% said that bicycle doesn’t need any cost and surprisingly the last 12% considered that cycling is faster than driving.

    In the other hand, the major reason for driving to work is the comfort for 40%, while 21% of people said that they prefer driving to work because of long distance, the other reason is that a car is faster than a bicycle to 14%, a similar percent said that they need to carry things to work, and lastly 11% considered the driving safer than cycling.

    In general the major people prefer driving a car to work its comfort, while the main reason for cycling to work is healthy and environmental.

    Thank you

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    Re: hello can you check my essay please

    Quote Originally Posted by maildor View Post
    Hello, can you check my essay please?

    The first chart describes why some people cycle ing to work, while the second one describe why outlines the reasons others prefer driving. to work.

    The rese 2 two main reasons for way given by people who prefer to ride a bicycle to work were for 30%, first is health and fitness, the second is that a bicycle is and less pollution. Each accounted for 30%. than a car, Meanwhile, 15% of theme said they prefer a bicycle because it's easier to park. for it parking facility, the Another 13% said that using a bicycle doesn’t need incur any cost, and surprisingly, the last 12% considered that cycling is faster than driving.

    In On the other hand, the major reason for driving to work is the was comfort for 40%, while 21% of people said that they prefer driving to work because of the long distances involved. Moreover, 14% gave speed as the another reason for preferring to drive. is They pointed out that a car is faster than a bicycle. to 14%, A similar percentage said that they need to carry things to work, and lastly, 11% considered the driving safer than cycling.

    In general, the major reason people prefer driving a car to work its is comfort, while the main reason for cycling to work is related to health and the environment.

    Thank you.
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