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    During her pregnancy, Eva incurred

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    During her pregnancy, Eva incurred more than 30000 pounds debt on her credit card, on which she now pays 18.5 % rent. She looks at the expensive bags, jewellery, watches, clothes and shoes spread around her room and shivers, thinking about how much all this will cost her in the end.

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    Re: During her pregnancy, Eva incurred

    During her pregnancy, Eva incurred more than 30000 pounds in debt on her credit card, on which she now pays 18.5 % rent interest (per annum?). She looks at the expensive bags, jewellery, watches, clothes and shoes spread around her room and shivers(or shudders) (no comma) thinking about how much all this these will cost her in the end.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: During her pregnancy, Eva incurred

    30000 pounds 30,000

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