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    sania-baharat is offline Member
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    This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will try t

    Is this sentence correct? It was written by my English teacher.
    I think there is something wrong with the underlined part. It doesn't make scene.

    Punishment can negatively affect children behaviors in two way. This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will try to avoid telling the truth.

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    Re: This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will t

    "This is because when they get punished for doing something wrong, they will try to avoid telling the truth" would sound better to me (but I'm not one of the teachers, so better wait for what they have to say).

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    Re: This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will t

    Punishment can negatively affect children's behaviors in two ways.

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    Re: This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will t

    Quote Originally Posted by sania-baharat View Post
    Is this sentence correct? It was written by my English teacher.
    I think there is something wrong with the underlined part. It doesn't make scene.

    Punishment can negatively affect children behaviors in two way. This is because when they know punished when they do something wrong, they will try to avoid telling the truth.
    Make sense?

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