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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    People believed Bob wore dark

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct. I am not sure if my punctuation is correct, either.

    People believed Bob wore dark sunglasses to look cool, while actually, he suffered from a rare eye condition. Even a small amount of direct sunlight caused him pain and swollen eyes.

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    GoesStation is offline Moderator
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    Re: People believed Bob wore dark

    Here's a chance to exercise your comma extinguisher. The first sentence doesn't need any and would be improved by substituting when for while.
    I am not a teacher.

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