Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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Since her husband's death, Christmas had become the worst time for Anna. Nothing could relieve her pain, neither twinkling Christmas lights outside, nor special Christmas radio programs, which she could listen to the whole day. Her mind was still with her husband on that summer day, more than 50 years ago when they were walking hand in hand through the woods under the canopy of old trees. Michael stopped, grasped the sides of her head, and gave her a passionate kiss on the lips. That moment had become indelible in her mind. She knew it would be the last shred of consciousness that would stay with her until the end.
Since her husband's death, Christmas had become the worst time for Anna. Nothing could relieve her pain, neither twinkling Christmas lights outside, nor special Christmas radio programs, which she could listen to the whole day. Her mind was still with her husband on that summer day, more than 50 years ago when they were walking hand in hand through the woods under the canopy of old trees. Michael stopped, grasped the sides of her head, and gave her a passionate kiss on the lips. That moment had become indelible in her mind. She knew it would be the last shred of consciousness that would stay with her until the end.