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    Jura1992 is offline Newbie
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    Question Someday, one day, ever

    Hello

    Let's say I'm speaking to my friend about girls. I'm still single and he's going to break up with his girlfriend.

    I say to him ->

    If I find a girlfriend someday, I will always love her like nothing in the world.
    If I find a girlfriend one day, I will always love her like nothing in the world.
    If I ever find a girlfriend, I will always love her like nothing in the world.

    Which one do you prefer?

    Thank you in advance for your help ;)

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    Re: Someday, one day, ever

    You can use any of those.

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    Re: Someday, one day, ever

    Thank you, Raymott

    Would you help me once more, please?

    As for the rest of the sentence, is it correct?

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    Re: Someday, one day, ever

    "Love her like nothing in the world" doesn't work.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Someday, one day, ever

    "... I will love her more than anything [else] in the world" would work better.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Someday, one day, ever

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    "... I will love her more than anything [else] in the world" would work better.
    That sounds much better

    Last question -> Is "always" redundant in the sentence? I would like to emphasize the verb "love" by it.

    If I find a girlfriend someday, I will always love her more than anything in the world.

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    Re: Someday, one day, ever

    Quote Originally Posted by Jura1992 View Post
    Is "always" redundant in the sentence? I would like to emphasize the verb "love" by it.

    If I find a girlfriend someday, I will always love her more than anything in the world.
    It's not redundant. It tells the reader that you commit to loving your girlfriend for the rest of your life.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Someday, one day, ever

    It's emphatic and romantic, not redundant: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3JWTaaS7LdU

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