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    CNN journalists

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    CNN journalists are very keen on accusing other countries for several kinds of crimes against humanity while at the same time forgetting about their own nation's evil past and present. Their ancestors stole the entire country from the so-called native Americans, their own generation has caused more wars than any other nation during the last decades, yet they have the audacity to criticize other countries. If they were not as bigoted as they are, CNN journalists would start a movement to give the entire country back to the so-called native Americans, the real owners of the land.

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    Re: CNN journalists

    I would delete so-called- they are Native Americans, and I would capitalise both words.

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