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    developed a long-lasting friendship

    Could you please check this paragraph? I write this paragraph to practice to use "adjective clause + to infinitive" correctly. I hope I do well.

    I have developed a long-lasting friendship with my friend whose name is Sarah. She is so caring and sensitive that everyone wants to have her as their close friend to enjoy her company. This is because if you go through tough times, she is the first person to offer her help and to do her best to support and comfort you in crisis by being a good listener.
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    Re: developed a long-lasting friendship

    Quote Originally Posted by ambitious-girl View Post
    Could you please check this paragraph? I write this wrote paragraph it to practice to use using "adjective clause + to infinitive" correctly. I hope I do have done well.

    I have developed a long-lasting friendship with my friend whose name is a girl/woman called Sarah. She is so caring and sensitive that everyone wants to have her as their a close friend and to enjoy her company. This is because if you are going through tough times, she is the first person to offer her help and to do her best to support and comfort you in crisis, particularly by being a good listener.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: developed a long-lasting friendship

    You could also say she will be the first person to offer.

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