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    AirbusA321 is offline Banned
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    There is a crowd

    Are both versions OK and which one sounds better?

    1 There is a crowd of people gathering to protest against the President outside his Phoenix rally with many so-called social justice warriors among them.

    2 There are many protesters who gather outside the President's rally to protest against him with many of them being so-called social justice warriors.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Re: There is a crowd

    I prefer the first, but would add a comma before with many to both.

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    Re: There is a crowd

    The simple present doesn't work in number 2.
    I am not a teacher.

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