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    My birthday

    Could you please proofread this context?

    Whenever my birthday is approaching, I feel as if I am growing old. This day makes me feel depressed. I will be also thinking about opportunities I have missed, chances I have ruined, and times I have wasted. However, I set some goals and make a resolution to work harder, to do my best, and to make the most of my opportunities by my next birthday.

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    Re: My birthday

    Quote Originally Posted by newkeenlearner View Post
    Could you please proofread this con text?

    Whenever my birthday is approaching, I feel as if I am growing old. This That day makes me feel depressed. I will be also thinking about opportunities I have missed, chances I have ruined, and times I have wasted. However, I also try on my birthday to set some goals and make a resolution to work harder, to do my best, and to make the most of my opportunities by my next birthday.
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