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    zapan09 is offline Newbie
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    Talking Need help for a sentence, correction (not homework)

    Hey !

    I want to post a message on my facebook account about a new set of creation that i make, but I'm not sure it's really correct :

    ""Hello FB friends !

    I need your help

    Could you support a fresh new artist ( ME ) !?!

    Come discover my new creation of original T-shirts, bags and stuff ! (In exclusive, FB first post )
    : link

    I'm a young designer who love fashion and photography, so please comment and share if you like my work (or if you don't ^^ )

    P.S : If you share this post, you got a chance to win 2 t-shirt for free

    Feel free to contact me about anything, like if you love a design and want more product with it or anything !


    Thank you a lot !""


    Well that's it, thank you for your help

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    teechar is offline Moderator
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    Re: Need help for a sentence, correction (not homework)

    Quote Originally Posted by zapan09 View Post
    Hey !
    Hello!
    Hello zapan09, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by zapan09 View Post
    I want to post a message on my Facebook page account about a new set of items creation that I make have made, but I'm not sure it's really correct.

    "Hello FB friends!

    I need your help.

    Could you support a fresh new artist (me)?!

    Come discover my new creation of original T-shirts, bags and other fashion items! stuff ! (In (exclusive FB first post)
    link

    I'm a young designer who loves fashion and photography, so please comment and share and comment if you like my work (or if you don't!).

    P.S: If you share this post, you got have a chance to of winning two t-shirts. for free

    Feel free to contact me about anything, like e.g., if you love a particular design and want to see more products based on it. with it or anything !


    Thanks you a lot!"


    Well that's it. Thank you for your help.
    Good luck with your venture.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 25-Aug-2017 at 16:08. Reason: Added a correction

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