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    Nowadays you must have seen that kids are less active. They sit in front of the lapto

    Nowadays you must have seen that kids are less active. They sit in front of the laptops, android phones, TVs, play stations. These devices emit rays that are harmful for our eyes and health. So can we say "Kids bodies are not enough strong to "take" or "endure" or "tackle" the rays that are emitted out of these gadgets. That is why a lot of kids have to wear specks nowadays"?

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    Re: Nowadays you must have seen that kids are less active. They sit in front of the l

    Could you please check my sentences?

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    Re: Nowadays you must have seen that kids are less active. They sit in front of the l

    Quote Originally Posted by tufguy View Post
    Nowadays You must have seen noticed that kids are less active nowadays. They sit in front of their laptops, android mobile/cell phones, TVs and PlayStations. These devices emit rays that are harmful for to our eyes and health. So can we say Kids' bodies are not enough strong enough to "take" or "endure" or "tackle" withstand the rays that are emitted out of by these gadgets. That is why a lot of kids have to wear specks specs/glasses/spectacles nowadays.
    See above.

    It doesn't really make sense to say that their entire bodies can't deal with the rays but then be so specific about them wearing glasses. I'd change "bodies" to "eyes". If you keep "bodies", come up with a different ending.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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