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    Bassim is offline VIP Member
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    Whenever Diana watched children play

    I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

    Whenever Diana watched children play, pain swept through her. When she was a child, her parents worked so hard, they never had time to play with her.

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    Rover_KE is offline Moderator
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    Re: Whenever Diana watched children play

    I'd delete the commas in the second sentence.

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