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    Tsoglog is offline Newbie
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    I would be really appreciated if teachers and experts edit this e-mail. Thank you!

    Dear XXXXXXX,

    I just received the flight ticket from the Embassy, and would like to know if there's a pick-up service from the school?
    I read the "Welcome Letter" that has been attached to the admission notice, but it said that all the information about flight should be sent before 30th of August to [email address]. However, the ticket has been sent to me today, and therefore I would like to ask for your aid in this little issue

    Sincerely,

    ABCD
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    teechar is offline Moderator
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    Re: I would be really appreciated if teachers and experts edit this e-mail. Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by Tsoglog View Post
    Dear XXXXXXX,

    I just received the flight ticket from the embassy, and I would like to know if the school provides transfer from the airport. re's a pick-up service from the school?

    I read in the "Welcome Letter" that has been attached to came with the admission notice , but it said that all the information about flights should be sent before the 30th of August to [email address]. However, the ticket has been sent was only delivered to me today and, therefore, I would like to ask for your help with this matter. aid in this little issue

    Sincerely,

    ABCD
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